After “Hey Judge, don’t be afraid – you were made to go out and get her”, the next line is “The minute you let her into your heart” not “Remember to let her into your heart” – that bit only comes later.

Also, there is no “better better better” refrain between the first two passes. And it omits the chorus-y bit between the first two passes and the third:

“And any time you feel the pain, hey Jude, refrain …”

So like I say – cute, but not correct. Pedantic? Sure, but as soon as you use a flow chart, you’re in the realm of computer science and mathematics, and we’re a pedantic lot.